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 * 1) 1-Brenden and #2-Kollyn

Reading Response Day 1


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this story cind of riminds me of being at school. with out the bully.
 * 1) 2 the setting of the story is his school. the charictors are bububixi the big mean bully and his friends kevin and max.

Extra Comments: i wonder who is telling the story. Reading Response Day 3


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 * 1) 2my favorit carictor is nolan becaus tries to do thing that are realy hard. or he takes a chalange. also because he is nice. he is also my favorite charictor becouse he helps people. my worst favorite carictor is is bubu because he is mean to people and he steas peoples stuff. also because he is abully and who likes bully

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Reading Response Day 5


 * 1) 1 In my story Nolen the mane carikter made a spy pack. It has a hiden camra in it to take pachrs of Babba the bully doing bad thing for a projekt. He also made a website on the computer. He made a pitch called Babba's big but.


 * 1) 2 in shredder man nolen makes a backpac that a camra soots photos out of he made the website shredderman. com where he post pictures and videos of bubu the school bully. but to get his web site he has to beg his mom to give it to him. but he cant tell her what he is dooing other wise he will get in big trouble. he created his site and posted the bully in actoun

Extra Comments: Mrs. Rowe: Brenden, from your summary above, I can kind of get an idea of what's going on in your book. However, remember yesterday, we talked a lot about this summary being 1-2 paragraphs? I feel like there are a lot of important details missing from your summary because you've read 5 whole days! Take your time!

Reading Response Day 7


 * 1) 1 One text to self was when I was in the car going home from my grandmas house because paper was flying everywhere like in the book. There were napikens in our car. We had the window open so it was very windy in the car. So the napkins were flying every where just like the paper flying off the building.


 * 1) 2 the part where he biulds the spy pack kind of reminds me of when i tried to make one but i failed. i think this is a awesome story

Extra Comments: Reading Response Day 9


 * 1) 1 The main event of the story was when he through all the papers from his back pack on the play ground. It said something about Bubba Bixby and it had a website on it that said shredder man.com. All the kids read one of the sheets of paper and the teachers and principles wondered who did it. Nolan did it by Bubba Bixgot in trouble.


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Extra Comments: Brenden; Were did Bubba go in the story.